A Memoir in 3rd Person

Feedback Requested Give me your first reaction: Did you read the whole thing? Did you laugh or scratch your head or …?, Tell me what’s working and what can be improved, What is the crux of this piece for you?, Suggest places to publish Andy Tran’s...

Revisiting “Let It Bed” by Arnaldo Baptista

Feedback Requested Give me your first reaction: Did you read the whole thing? Did you laugh or scratch your head or …?, Offer your favorite line(s), What is the crux of this piece for you? Yosh’s Draft This is a free-write; I gave myself nine minutes and...

Apologetics

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The Space Between Winter and Spring

Feedback Requested Kim’s Draft (Just Listen) Wet sandy footsteps, like crunchy cereal underfoot, heading out through the alley. A clucking chicken, representing the brood, only mildly alarmed. Gurgling water on the other side of a too-tall fence; I imagine a...

One Last Thing

Feedback Requested Kim Silva’s Draft (I really had trouble with the idea of “unreliable narrator” in this…probably because of the topic I chose.  There is a lie here, and I really only left one clue!  Note, too, that while the topic seems...

Four truths and a lie

Feedback Requested Give me your first reaction: Did you read the whole thing? Did you laugh or scratch your head or …?, Offer your favorite line(s), Tell me what’s working and what can be improved FF’s Draft This is a letter written to a lobster...